It's day TEN of Stacy Bennett-Hoyt's (AKA @rowanwolf66) festively fabulous 12 Days of Christmas blog hop.
12 Days, 12 Stories, each 200-300 words. The contest theme is gifts and each day has a prompt. Today's is:
SPIRIT
The vial was green, its contents opalescent. Sotero the Solemn lifted it to the moonlight
jubilation slashing a smile on his long face.
At long last he had discovered the secret his alchemist grandfather had
failed to find. He had unlocked the key
to eternal life.
Sotero’s Superb Spirit Sucking Service would make him his
fortune. Forever.
Centuries stretched out ahead of him, saturated with power
and wealth - and knowledge. All that
time, all those discoveries. The sweet
taste of knowledge slid potent as mead on his tongue.
Reverently, he placed the trapped spirit on his bookshelf
and went downstairs for supper. Genius
had a way of making a man hungry. He
might be immortal, but he still had to eat.
***
Agnes liked her job.
It was interesting poking around a warlock’s lair, dusting his magical
artefacts and polishing his cauldron. He
worked hard and she admired that in a magic worker. Too many lazy buggers around, peddling quack
potions.
Lost in thought, she didn’t notice the vial before it was
too late. The stone flags smashed it in an instant releasing a greenish vapour
that coiled around her sweet as sin.
A voice whispered, unseen hands stroking across her skin,
settling like a silken cloak. She tried
not to breathe, failed. Sinking to her
knees, she fainted.
***
Ten minutes later, Sotero stumbled over her body. “Agnes?” he said. Her eyes snapped open and he noticed her skin
was smoother, her hair lighter. “Agnes?”
The woman repeated, her voice curiously low. “I’m Phil. And you’re the guy who
stole my soul.”
Genius not withstanding, it seemed the process needed a
little work. Thank goodness for
experimental models. He would hire a new
cleaner in the morning.
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| Image by Masha Falcov on Etsy |


2 comments:
Agnes is in for a shock! I love the way you pull all the threads together to create wonderful myths and fantasies!
I love Sotero's pragmatic approach to setbacks! What an amusing tale--lots of humorous touches ("Sotero’s Superb Spirit Sucking Service") and lovely lines ("a greenish vapour that coiled around her sweet as sin." Delicious!
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